Reviewer: Jasper_Says_Relax (Signed) · Date: 01 Aug 2009 01:00 PM · On: Why i do it.

Did you win? You should win! That was great! I loved all the pain that you put into Esme's thoughts. Really good!

Author's Response:

they didnt award anyone yet. i dont think. thanks for the review. i wish i could win but there is so much other people who have way better stories then me. like lustandthrill. her story everything changes and remain the same is the bomb. you should read that!!

Reviewer: awsomealice94 (Signed) · Date: 30 Jul 2009 10:10 AM · On: Why i do it.

that was an interesting version of Esme. but her husband wasn't nice-he abused her. when he went into the war and she found out he was coming home she fled from her parents while she was pregnant and became a school teacher where the Cullen's were living.

But still, it would be nice if Esme had a husband who loved her.

This was good

Author's Response:

Wow, really. i dont think i read that in the book. that so sad, for esme.

anywho... thanks for the review!