Reviewer: Danceinggirl109 (Signed) · Date: 18 Aug 2009 03:19 PM · On: Author's Note.
okay i highly doubt that you can have writers block for 2 years but that is ust me. I like the story. PLease please write another chapter. ;)
Reviewer: ashleigh_cullen_xxx (Signed) · Date: 09 Jul 2009 01:17 AM · On: Author's Note.
plzplzplz keep writing ! this story is amazing!
Reviewer: Doodle_Master (Signed) · Date: 09 Jun 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 6
But Vampires can't puke and their noses can't bleed because they don't have blood.
Reviewer: Doodle_Master (Signed) · Date: 09 Jun 2009 09:31 PM · On: The Weasleys
Fred and George are my favorites too. They are just plain AWESOME!!! And this is a reveiw not a commentary and I am an idiot.
Reviewer: Doodle_Master (Signed) · Date: 09 Jun 2009 09:28 PM · On: Platform Nine and Three Quarters
COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL!!! This is the best Idea for a story ever!!!!
Reviewer: Doodle_Master (Signed) · Date: 09 Jun 2009 09:24 PM · On: Missing Bella.
EmmetT, serious? Never!
Reviewer: Within Temptation (Signed) · Date: 25 Mar 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 6
Uhh...you do know for a puking pastle to work, you have to have food in your stomach? Blood never reaches Vampire's stomachs. And for a nosebleed nougat to work, you have to actually have blood? Okay...now I'm sounding mean, I'm sorry. How about one of those fake wands? Or some kind of special formulated candy that causes a vampire to loose its beuty+ dazzle abilty for a week?
Reviewer: wolfgirl44 (Signed) · Date: 25 Mar 2009 08:24 AM · On: Author's Note.
Nice Job. Please continue on. try to get rid of writer's block by writing about not trying to write through it I know where i'm going, but i can't get there, cause writer's block is in the air, so to keep my ideas flowing, go settle in someonelse's hair
Reviewer: OCD_Obsessive Cullen Disorder (Signed) · Date: 20 Mar 2009 04:44 PM · On: Author's Note.
aww mann.. i wanted to know what happend next.. :( please get over your writers block soon.. xx
Reviewer: Squeeker (Signed) · Date: 10 Mar 2009 06:29 PM · On: Author's Note.
I like Harry Potter and Twilight and have enjoyd your fanfiction story quite a bit, and I hope that you get in the writing "mood" again so we can hear how this turns out. I would love to read more!! Thanks for writing!!!
Reviewer: Sandroline (Signed) · Date: 22 Feb 2009 12:14 PM · On: Author's Note.
Please,please update soon.And the creature whom Bella turns into is a Veela who were Bulgarian mascots during the Quidditch World Cup.
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Fanfic lover (Signed) · Date: 25 Jan 2009 03:39 PM · On: Missing Bella.
I'm guessing you have seen the movie Twilight?And the harry potter with cedric XDDD good way to put it togther!
Reviewer: Vampire Girl (Signed) · Date: 09 Nov 2008 07:07 PM · On: Missing Bella.
Update? Please? I finished the Harry Potter series in a week...and now i'm bored to the point of listening to Beatles music. Ugh, i've got music STUCK in my HEAD! Erg.
Reviewer: EdwardCullenLovesMe (Signed) · Date: 31 Oct 2008 08:29 PM · On: Author's Note.
Aaw, it was good though.
Reviewer: Vampire Girl (Signed) · Date: 02 Oct 2008 12:00 AM · On: Author's Note.
Okay, I know ur probably getting sick of me reviewing...again...and again...and again. But I Beta read and I was wondering if you'd want me to help you...? you could send me your ideas and I could read over them and edit and grammaritize them? I was reading your reviews (nerdy, right? Strings Geek and a total nerd. I'm a loser, right?) and noticed that you said your stories kept being rejected. The only time I got mine rejected was when I didn't understand the whole submitting stories thing and messed it all up. It was really sad...a horrible display of IQness. Anyways, I would LOVE to beta for you and only ask that you say that I beta-ed. Nothing more. Just say : 'Beta-ed by Vampire Girl' or something along those lines. Or if you really like me... Anyways, you can just email me your story and I'll read over it. I check my email several times a day and will put your story as my number one priority, under homework. I'm already blowing off my required 1 hour of practice each week for violin. (its called lying. I cant do it verbally, but written is okay) So get back to me. I love Crossover (hence my name on fanfiction [Crossover Genius]) and love authors who write crossover. If you don't want a beta, i understand. I dont have people beta for me either. But i dont usually struggle with writers block- but when i do its severe. My email can be found on my bio :[ Vampire Girl
Reviewer: Vampire Girl (Signed) · Date: 01 Oct 2008 11:50 PM · On: Author's Note.
I love your story. You definitely need to tie in the Tri Wizard Cup and have Edward try and steal Bella's heart back. (Edward will be in the Tri-wizard cup, see? But I'm also going to use that idea, so don't get mad when someone else has a similar event). Bella is kinda mean. She would've fallen over gasping and crying over Edward. Kinda like she did in New Moon and Eclipse. But, anyho, you did say that Bella was taking on a different identity when she was in Forks. You really should have her be clumsy still, so that Edward can continue to save her again...and again...and again. You need to explain who Harry is. Is it Harry Potter? Or a new character? Is Harry in the same cabin on the train as the Weasleys? What year is Harry in? How does Bella know him well enough to just waltz over and take his most prized possesion (other than his Maurader's Map and Fire Bolt) Dont worry about being nerdy with Honor Orchestra. My strings teacher is making us learn the Honor Orchestra pieces if we're trying out or not. And it sucks. She's the guest conductor, by the way. So you'll be meeting her, granted you get in. (I play violin) I have half a mind to try out and then we can gab about Fanfiction...but I don't think Mrs Mazzullo would be too happy with me. and then there are the chances that I don't get in and you don't get it. Yeah, one of my not-so-great ideas. And yes, I am not talking about anything irrelevant. I live in Phoenix, too, so it is the same Honor Orchestra. (If this is too stalkerish you don't have to answer, but what school do you go to? It would be creepy if we actually knew each other...I'll answer if you answer)
Reviewer: Vampire Girl (Signed) · Date: 01 Oct 2008 11:25 PM · On: The Weasleys
That's how it always is. Alice always gets more lines in my stories, and I cut Bella out as much as I can. Which is why she...never mind. Read my story, The Potter Twins, if you like this one and you'll see what I said to never mind, which you will mind when you read my story. I love your story, by the way, its SO awesome. I like this Bella, she's all angry at Edward. She's fun when shes angry. Especially when shes asking Charlie for a baseball bat. Pointer: I think its going a bit fast. Slow down a bit- this is a story of large length. There's a lot to fill us in on. No more- use our imaginations. More- Sorry if you don't understand, I'll answer your questions in reivews if you want. That's the type of author I like. We're reading a Harry Potter crossover- of COURSE we're using our imaginations. Harry Potter and Twilight spheres are not written to touch (they might as well, though) and we're writing them to touch. We've got the best imaginations ever, we rock. Good luck with the story- I'm hanging on every word!
Reviewer: Vampire Girl (Signed) · Date: 30 Sep 2008 12:47 AM · On: Missing Bella.
Ohh! I like! I just started reading the Harry Potter books on Saturday (3 days ago) and I'm on the 5th one. Will this story give anything away? I'm guessing it won't considering your centering around Edward and the Cullens. I like it! I just started a Harry Potter Crossover! (The Potter Twins)
Reviewer: WinniePony (Signed) · Date: 15 Jun 2008 08:49 PM · On: Author's Note.
Aw. I'm sorry you have writer's block. I like your story though. Post stuff as soon as it's acceptable, I want to read it. =D
Reviewer: spunkygirl517 (Signed) · Date: 29 May 2008 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 6
i loved that all the ch.s please keep updating
Reviewer: Charmingal (Signed) · Date: 14 May 2008 02:29 PM · On: Author's Note.
(T_T) Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeee?!?
Reviewer: EdwardBiteMePlz (Signed) · Date: 02 May 2008 07:37 PM · On: Author's Note.
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: EdwardBiteMePlz (Signed) · Date: 02 May 2008 07:31 PM · On: I'm a um...um...I Don't Really Know What I Am
Veela my friend! :)
Reviewer: KrazyKristen (Signed) · Date: 22 Mar 2008 11:37 PM · On: Missing Bella.
I really like the part where Charlie called Edward a "leech" Priceless! Very Good by the way
Reviewer: Nymphadora_Cullen (Signed) · Date: 20 Mar 2008 06:13 PM · On: Author's Note.
Ohh I got an idea...Have Bella go out with Harry, and Ginny goes out with Edward... So funny!!!! 10/10
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