Out by MeggieJay

[Reviews - 12]

Summary:

All she ever wanted was out.

Out of this town, out of this world.

Always being pushed around,

Nobody considering the way she felt.

She planned for three months,

On how to get out.

And on a dark and stormy night,

She got out.

Out of this world.

That's all she ever wanted.

Out.

Rated Adult for language and adult content. Two characters are OOC.

Rated: Adult
Categories: No time frame/Other Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4774 Read: 172
Published: 29 Jul 2009 Updated: 31 Jul 2009

1. For Her by MeggieJay [Reviews - 12] half-star (4774 words)

Disclaimer: Stephanie Meyer owns Twilight. I just mess with her characters.

So this is my entry for the "It was a dark and stormy night" contest. It was a last minute idea that popped into my head, and was written four days before the deadline, so I'm hoping it gets validated as soon as possible!

This is a much more serious piece of writing. I hope I captured just how serious it is, and did it justice. I went back and forth with the rating, and I just think that Adult is better for this than Teen. Let me know if I should change it to Teen though.

Please give it a chance, don't stop reading it once you see what's wrong with the girl!